Fading love
"my heart aches"
By πππ°π³πͺπ’ ππ¦π―π¦ππ°π±π¦Published 2 years ago β’ 1 min read
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Every day, my heart aches.
Our love is fading away.
I want to keep it active.
I wish there was a stronger boat.
To keep our love safe:
Our love is drowning in the deep ocean.
I wish I could change how you think.
To reverse the flow of time
To bring back unforgettable memories.
Memories that make you fall in love with me all over again.
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Comments (4)
BEST! I LOVE IT!
Gloria, Your poem beautifully conveys the ache of losing a connection, using powerful imagery like a boat sinking in the ocean to symbolize love in distress. The wish to change someoneβs thoughts and relive cherished memories reflects a deep longing to repair and rekindle what's slipping away. Itβs a heartfelt portrayal of loveβs fragility and the hope to bring back the magic that once was. Your emotions truly shine through, and I encourage you to keep sharing these vulnerable momentsβit resonates deeply.
This was so poignant. Loved your poem!
Fabulous!