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Lessons in Chemistry
Lessons in Chemistry is a great book. They should make a movie out of it. It tells a great story about a female chemist in the 1950’s who everyone treats unfairly just because she’s a woman. But really she’s a genius! Extremely well written! I recommend reading it!
By Alex H Mittelman 3 years ago in Critique
Are School Uniforms Necessary Or Not?
Are School Uniforms Necessary Or Not? It has long been debated whether school uniforms are really necessary or not. While some say that they are absolutely useless, others say that they are an absolute must in every school. Some reasons they are necessary are that they make sure students don’t get distracted, or bully others. Some reasons they are unneeded are that they are unreasonably expensive, not great quality and sometimes too demanding. In this essay I will be discussing whether I think they are necessary or not.
By Aashini Rastogi3 years ago in Critique
Shadows in the Algorithm: An Unveiling of Unfairness in Machine Learning
In the gleaming corridors of our digital age, where algorithms dance and machines learn, there lies a shadow few dare to explore. A shadow cast by the biases and prejudices of a world far from perfect. This is a thrilling journey into the heart of unfairness in machine learning—a realm where ethics and technology intertwine, where justice meets judgment, and where human imperfection is reflected in the code.
By julien tate3 years ago in Critique
Baltic States put migrants to use and then eject them
It turned out that migrants are no longer welcome in the Baltic States. In 2002, the Ministers of the Council of Europe member states undertook to develop and implement integration policies founded on the principles of human rights, democracy and the rule of law. Being the Council of Europe member states the Baltic countries welcomed thousands of migrants and enthusiastically supported them.
By Adomas Abromaitis3 years ago in Critique
The Midnight Society
When I was just thirteen years old, I had the idea for this story. It was full of corruption, espionage, world politics, and maybe just slightly too ambitious for a kid. But I loved writing it. The research for how political power works, types of governments and their function, cold wars and espionage was endlessly fascinating. Crafting plot twist after plot twist, betrayal after betrayal, characters so real I could almost see them sitting before me was what gave me my kick start into writing. It got complicated, and twisted, and I was horrible at keeping up with notes, so I lost the trail of the plot and the enthusiasm to continue it.
By Sarah Massey3 years ago in Critique
A YA Story Looking for Input
*** This is basically an excerpt from a YA/Upper Middle grade story looking for critique.*** My main questions would be - from the perspective of a reader of this genre - does the story grab your attention? What needs to be added to make it more interesting? And, of course, if you notice any grammatical errors or clumsy sentences, feel free to point them out also. Add any critiques to the comment section, or PM if you would like it to be kept more quiet.
By KJ Aartila3 years ago in Critique
Advice Needed: A Yam's Tale
Hello there, everyone! I am once again taking another break from my regularly scheduled fiction to publish something in the new critique community. It was created by Vocal at a perfect time for me as, sat within my memory stick, a small story opening has existed. The problem with it is... I have no idea where to go with it!
By ThatWriterWoman3 years ago in Critique
Nostalgia on Wheels: The Most Popular Vehicles of the 1980s
The 1980s marked an era of bold fashion, vibrant music, and iconic pop culture moments. Alongside these trends, the automotive industry saw the rise of some of the most unforgettable vehicles that continue to evoke nostalgia among enthusiasts and collectors today. From muscle cars to compact hatchbacks, the 1980s had something for everyone. Let's take a journey back in time and explore the most popular vehicles that left an indelible mark on this vibrant decade.
By Justin Tardif3 years ago in Critique
