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Survey

of what?

By Harper LewisPublished about 5 hours ago 1 min read
Survey
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Has anyone ever painted you,

soft brushstrokes of watercolors,

wet like a tongue

or a piece of freshly cut fruit?

Flavors and textures foreign to your palate dancing undisturbed by teeth,

yours or others that may be loose?

Did something inside you ever stretch

like a cat in the sun, or coil like a rattlesnake,

poised, tail tilted, ready?

Or are you one of them,

those people slogging through life,

paying premiums on time, reducing

interest, drinking lukewarm Bud Light,

pretending not to care

that a house of cards

can never

be a cathedral, not caring

because you can’t worship

a 401k?

What if the bottom line

is the top

of something too big to see?

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About the Creator

Harper Lewis

I'm a subversive weirdo nerd witch who loves rocks. Intrusive rhyme bothers me. Some of my fiction may have provoked divorce proceedings in another state.😈

My words are mine. Suggest ai use and get eviscerated.

MA English literature, CofC

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  • Lana V Lynxabout an hour ago

    Hmm, what if I don't drink beer at all? I think the answer to the last question is to invert that pyramid and free yourself. Great questions, Harper!

  • Lamar Wigginsabout 4 hours ago

    Ok. Everything checks out except the warm bud light. 🤮 Interesting. You should add this as a possible challenge to that thread Vocal posted. Poem in the form of a survey.

  • Kendall Defoe about 5 hours ago

    This is very close to some of the work I read by Langston Hughes or Gwendolyn Brooks (the questioning and debating).

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