Oh Captain! How my Captain lies
Elegy to a once peaceful exploration of space

Oh Captain! How my Captain lies,
All fallen cold and dead.
She lived ‘mid war and strife below,
And now her story’s said.
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Now done, the path of peace she laid,
Through journeys to the stars.
A brighter heav’n in truth she made,
As ships she cast afar.
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All nations pledged their faith to her,
And vowed to forgo arms.
For sixty years the concord kept,
Safe from all conflict's harms.
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But now pacific path has ceased,
As rivals press their cause,
And nations raise their battle cry,
The fight no longer paused.
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Alas, the peace is laid to rest,
I mourn her swift demise.
No more will global amity
Sustain domain of skies.
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Yet all the more we now must strive,
Land grabbing to forbear.
The fruit of wit and science gained,
With all the world to share.
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For sure the legacy of peace
In silver craft is stored,
To carry on our noble trust
To galaxies abroad.
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For centuries these ships will sail,
Beyond our Earth and Sun.
Millenia they will endure,
When our poor world is done.
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Go with our blessings, ships of hope,
Sail to the ends of time.
Go with our history of love,
Humanity sublime.
O ~ o ~
O ~ o ~
Walt Whitman, O Captain! My Captain!
Outer Space Treaty, 1967
About the Creator
Raymond G. Taylor
Author living in Kent, England. Writer of short stories and poems in a wide range of genres, forms and styles. A non-fiction writer for 40+ years. Subjects include art, history, science, business, law, and the human condition.
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This reads like a powerful elegy for peace itself, blending grief and hope in a way that feels both cosmic and deeply human.